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jason

국적 : Korea, Republic of
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my wife is very kind and generous. last night, when I slept, I had a bad dream. so I screamed a lot. she was surprised at my screaming. she is pregnant. she shouldn't be surprised for her baby. I felt ashamed about that. at lunch time, I called her. but she said that are you ok? are you tired. how kind~! she worried about my condition and fatigue. I am grateful to my wife to worrying about me.: 날짜 : 2013-11-28 14:33:02 | 교정 : 1 | 조회 : 5,400
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Kaye
My wife is very kind and generous.
Last night, while I was sleeping, I had a bad dream. I screamed and made her startled. Since she's pregnant, I was worried. I felt ashamed. During lunch, I called her. Instead of me asking her if she's ok, She was the one to ask my condition. I am grateful to have a concerned wife.
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Danielle

국적 : United States
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Hi Jason. What you wrote is very sweet. I only have a few corrections: My wife is very kind and generous. Last night, while I was sleeping I had a bad dream and I screamed out loud. My wife is pregnant and when I screamed I startled her. It's not good for her to be startled because of the baby. I felt ashamed about it so at lunch time I called her. When she answered she asked me, "Are you ok? Are you tired?" How kind of her!~! She was worried about my condition and fatigue. I am grateful to my wife for caring about me. (Your wife sounds really nice. I changed a few words to enhance the meaning of what you wanted to say. I hope this helps): 날짜 : 2014-06-26 12:21:19

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