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I need these sentences for ebay. (교정 : 2)
국적 : Korea, Republic of
모국어 : Korean
구사언어 : ()
학습언어 : Thai(왕초보)
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I've sent you payment of 160$ inc S/H to your account as requested.

please remove your current ebay sale for the shoes as soon as you confirm my payment

Thank you for your help. :)
날짜 : 2011-12-29 01:59:13 | 교정 : 2 | 조회 : 4,999
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국적 : Philippines
모국어 : Filipino (Tagalog)
구사언어 : English(최고급)
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I've sent you already my payment amounting $16 for the current featured shoes at your ebay sales. Kindly send me a message upon confirmation of my payment and about the delivery of the aforementioned item.
날짜 : 2011-12-29 02:39:05
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  • Boogie
  • Thank you so much. How about asking removing the shoes from their list? Can I say "Please remove your current list for the shoes...?
  • 날짜 : 2011-12-29 11:34:06


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국적 : United States
모국어 : English
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I've sent the payment for $160 including S/H to your account, as requested.
Thank you for your help.

In English notation, the $ symbol always goes before the number, with no space.
You don't need to tell the eBay member how to run his store. If he has no more stock, he will remove the ad - or he may keep it posted, because he has more stock (or even leave it up and let it age off the page with eBay's normal aging).

Your grammar is very good.
날짜 : 2012-01-06 08:01:04
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