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국적 : Korea, Republic of
모국어 : Korean
구사언어 : English(초급)
학습언어 : English(왕초보)
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I am not good at English because there is no end to learning English although I have been learning English for 14 years.
Because of bad education, I have a lot of incorrect knowledge.
In spite of having studies, I could not get a high score in TOEFL.
However, I reckon that everythins is beneficial to me despite spending money.
날짜 : 2011-12-22 09:26:09 | 교정 : 2 | 조회 : 4,811
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국적 : United States
모국어 : English
구사언어 : Korean(고급)
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I understand how you feel about studying English, hehe. For your paragraph, I would write it like this: I am not good at English even though I have been studying for 14 years, because there is no end to learning English. Because I was taught poorly, a lot of my knowledge is incorrect. In spite of studying a lot, I could not get a high score on the TOEFL test. However, I reckon that all my English study is beneficial to me even though I spend money on it.
날짜 : 2011-12-22 11:55:41
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국적 : Philippines
모국어 : Filipino (Tagalog)
구사언어 : English(최고급)
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Learning is a continuous and endless process and so does with learning the English language. I may be not that good in English, committing a lot of mistakes and getting low scores in TOEFL but there is always a good side of it. Regardless of how much money I spend, I believe that all my efforts were not wasted but rather became a concrete foundation to my beneficial learning.

-Paraphrasing sentences is a good tool that could help you master the art of the English language. Practice it out. :D
날짜 : 2011-12-29 02:49:05
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