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Writing in French (교정 : 1)
- Je suis devenue une grande fan ? vous apr?s avoir vu votre concert d'apr?s-midi au 3 f?vrier.
Votre concert ?tait tr?s lyrique et vous ?tiez vraiment fantastique.
Sans doute, c'?tait le meilleur concert que j'ai jamais vu! -
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국적 : Korea, Republic of
모국어 : Korean
구사언어 : English(최고급), Korean(모국어), Japanese(중급), French(중급)
학습언어 : French(초급)
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모국어 : Korean
구사언어 : English(최고급), Korean(모국어), Japanese(중급), French(중급)
학습언어 : French(초급)
- My French is not that great to correct your sentences, so I showed this to my French tutor. She told me these sentences are pretty good. There was not much to correct. The 2nd and 3rd sentences are good and the first one she corrected was as follows;
Je suis devenue une grande fan apr?s avoir vu votre concert le 3 f?vrier.
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날짜 : 2011-12-26 07:20:57
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