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LDJ
국적 : Korea, Republic of
모국어 : Korean
구사언어 : Armenian(초급)
학습언어 : Armenian(고급)
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Today I logged in ontutor to study English for the first time.
It was not easy to me to register on the internet but in the long run I finished it.
I am working for the publisher called MKS where I am in charge of the marketing division.
Everyday the responsibility makes me uneasy and unhappy.
That is the reason why I study English.
To be strange, when I focus on learning I feel more happy.
It is time to wrap up to write.

LDJ

날짜 : 2014-07-07 18:07:48 | 교정 : 1 | 조회 : 1,508
사용된 언어 : English
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국적 : United States
모국어 : English
구사언어 : Sign Languages(중급), Spanish(모국어)
학습언어 : Italian(왕초보), French(선택안함)
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Hello LDJ. These are some of the corrections I was able to find, however, you did very well :)

Today, I logged onto OnTutor to study English for the first time.

It was not easy for me to register on the internet, but in the long run, I finished it.

I am working for the publisher called MKS, where I am in charge of the marketing division.

Everyday, the responsibility makes me uneasy and unhappy.

That is the reason why I study English.

To be strange, when I focus on learning, I feel more happy.

It is time to wrap up this write.
날짜 : 2014-08-25 21:09:57
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