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Dialog-English Exam Practice (교정 : 1)
국적 : Korea, Republic of
모국어 : Korean
구사언어 : English(초급)
학습언어 : English(중급)
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A: Look at that dog! Wow, He looks very brave.

B: Oh, I think that dog is Poongsan Dog.

A: Poongsan Dog? What is it?

B: It is korea dog. It calls ‘The dog kill the tiger’. It is very brave and has big minded.

A: Does it likes Jindo dog?

B: Yes. But it is a little different. The Poongsan dog is bigger and has more furs than the Jindo dog.

A: What does it look like?

B: The Poongsan dog has small eyes. Its neck is thick and short. And Its ears are small and they look beside.

A: Um, I see.

B: The poongsan dog is almost meek. But when he fight his enemy, he is very violent.

A: really? He looks very meek and mild! It is surprise!

B: Yes, I think so, too. And it is very loyal to owner.

A: Oh! I heard it few month ago. Anyway, I want to raise it some day.

B: I wish you can do it.





Is it right?
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A: Look at that dog! Wow, He looks very brave.


Look at that dog. Wow! He looks very brave.

B: Oh, I think that dog is Poongsan Dog.


Oh, I think that dog is a Poongsan Dog.

A: Poongsan Dog? What is it?


Poongsab DOg? What is that?






B: It is korea dog. It calls ‘The dog kill the tiger’. It is very brave and has big minded.


It's a Korean dog. The dog is called the tiger killer. It's very brave and smart.






A: Does it likes Jindo dog?
(correct)

B: Yes. But it is a little different. The Poongsan dog is bigger and has more furs than the Jindo dog.


Yes, but there is a small diference. (Next sentence is correct)

A: What does it look like?


How does it look like?<

B: The Poongsan dog has small eyes. Its neck is thick and short. And Its ears are small and they look beside.


(correct) Their neck is thick and short, their ears are small and they look cute.



A: Um, I see.


(correct)

B: The poongsan dog is almost meek. But when he fight his enemy, he is very violent.


The Poongsan dog looks gentle(meek), but they get really wild when they fight.


A: really? He looks very meek and mild! It is surprise!
(Fist sentence is correct) I'm surprised.




B: Yes, I think so, too. And it is very loyal to owner.


I think so too, and it's very loyal to their master (owner)



A: Oh! I heard it few month ago. Anyway, I want to raise it some day.


(first sentence is correct I to have and train one someday.


날짜 : 2012-09-04 23:35:29
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