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Simple sentences (교정 : 1)
- 1. 내가 스스로에대한 만족감을 얻을때 즐겁다.
I am pleased when I get self-satisfaction.
I feel delighted when I satisfied from me.
2. 내가 대학에 합격했을때 기뻤다.
I was happy when I passed the entrance exam of a university.
3. 내가 다리를 다쳤을때 매우 슬펐다.
I was very sad when I hurt my leg.
I was very sad when I broke my leg.
4. 내가 좋아하는 남자가 사귀자고 했을때가 최고의 날이였다.
I had the best day of my life when my favorite man asked me a date. -
날짜 : 2012-02-07 23:01:56 | 교정 : 1 | 조회 : 5,097
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- 1. The first sentence is better, but still a little unnatural. The second sentence is wrong. I would say something like "I feel delighted when I'm satisfied with myself."
2. A small change: "I was happy when I passed the university entrance exam." or slightly closer to the Korean sentence: "I was happy when I got in to university."
3. Both are correct. Just make sure you understand the difference in meaning: "Hurt" is not always very serious and can be something like a small cut or bruise. "Broke" means the bone snapped, and the person needs a cast.
4. The grammar is mostly right, it's just a little unnatural. A small change: "It was the best day of my life when the guy I really liked asked me out."
Hope that helps! -
날짜 : 2012-02-08 08:22:59
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