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LDJ
From : Korea, Republic of
Speaks(Native) : Korean
Speaks : Armenian(Elementary)
Studying : Armenian(Advanced)
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Today I logged in ontutor to study English for the first time.
It was not easy to me to register on the internet but in the long run I finished it.
I am working for the publisher called MKS where I am in charge of the marketing division.
Everyday the responsibility makes me uneasy and unhappy.
That is the reason why I study English.
To be strange, when I focus on learning I feel more happy.
It is time to wrap up to write.

LDJ

Date : 2014-07-07 18:07:48 | Correction : 1 | Views : 5,271
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From : United States
Speaks(Native) : English
Speaks : Sign Languages(Intermediate), Spanish(Native)
Studying : Italian(Absolute Beginner), French(No selection)
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Hello LDJ. These are some of the corrections I was able to find, however, you did very well :)

Today, I logged onto OnTutor to study English for the first time.

It was not easy for me to register on the internet, but in the long run, I finished it.

I am working for the publisher called MKS, where I am in charge of the marketing division.

Everyday, the responsibility makes me uneasy and unhappy.

That is the reason why I study English.

To be strange, when I focus on learning, I feel more happy.

It is time to wrap up this write.
Date : 2014-08-25 21:09:57
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