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I have two younger coworkers in workplace. They are younger than me by 5-year-old. (Correction : 1)
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I have two younger coworkers in workplace. They are younger than me by 5-year-old. I have managed to get along with each of them. Sometimes I feel that relationships with them isn't developing as much as expected. In the other hand, those two young workers seemed to be building a strong friendship. Seeing them hanging out together, I am green with envy. I agonized over the reason relationtships isn't going on after my heart and sometimes put it to the age difference. But I realized that it's not that threre is an age difference between us, rather, it's just that I am not a goood mixer to make fraiends and be on intermate terms with them.

Date : 2013-08-28 13:25:14 | Correction : 1 | Views : 6,279
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I have two younger coworkers in workplace. They are younger than me by 5 years. I have managed to get along with each of them. Sometimes I feel that my relationship with them isn't developing as much as expected.On the other hand, those two young workers seem to be building a strong friendship with each other.Seeing them hanging out together, I am green with envy.I agonized over the reason that relationship isn't developing as I want it to be and sometimes I blame it on the age difference.But I realized that it's not that there is an age difference between us, rather, it's just that I am not good with mingling with friends and having close bonds with them.

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mingle
On the other hand
close bond
Date : 2013-09-04 00:03:53
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  • MrKim
  • Thanks teacher MarieJane^^
    Due to your help, I could keep practicing wrting. Thank you
  • Date : 2013-09-04 22:33:48